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We so often only think of the travel
narrative as an author's telling of an
experience that occurred at some locale away from home. The
students this
semester, however, did not appear to be motivated to write
about travel in
terms of the experience of a geographical place. Rather
their writings led
them to discoveries of the self by evaluating the way that
movement and a
change of location affect their own personal psyches. Thus,
in this issue
of Journeys the narratives focus on an individual's entry
into new space and
how entering into a different space inwardly alters the
self. These
narratives also take into account the manner in which the
dynamics of a
space react to one's gender, race, and/or nationality, and
likewise how
one's gender, race, and/or nationality responds to a
particular space. As
such, the contributions to chapters one and two are deeply
personal, as the
reader of this journal shall see.
"Discovery," the title of chapter one, responds to the
question that
frames this particular unit: How does a writer recount a
move from one
place to another that affects either his/her life or
perspective of the
world? The interrogation of this question, yielded essays
that depict some
shift, some change, or transformation that occurred within
the inner self of
the narrator of the story, as a result of that narrator's
movement from one
place to another or entry into a new space. Simultaneously,
these essays
honor Maya Angelou's I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings.
Angelou's text
became the model for this unit. It is a stirring text which
has the young
Maya moving from one space to another, each move bringing
about its own
shift, its own transformation within the psyche of young
Maya. In
paralleling I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings, a deeply
personal expose of
young Maya's life, these essays are equally personal in their
depictions of
the manner in which movement and new entries affect the
personal lives of
the narrators. Two essays in this chapter, "Cultural
Orientation" by
Victoria Freeman and "Rendition of Maturity" by Jordan Smith
are essays
which indicate how the change from one school to another
prompt deep
feelings of insecurity in young people. Britney Bennet's
"coming out"
narrative anticipates leaving home for college with the
expectation of
finding new spaces that will allow the narrator "to swim."
Earl Campbell's
dolorous internal narrative, "A Walk in Thought," gives us
access to the
narrator's thoughts as he rides in the family car to attend
the funeral of a
loved one . Maryann Flanigan's essay "Spring Zephyr" shows
us how a short
ride across a state line, "a 20 minute drive to an apartment
complex in
Bridgewater, New Jersey, would upset the balance...[she'd]
struggled so long
to achieve."
Alasdair Pettinger's "What a Difference a Border Makes"
sparked
conversations concerning how the mere crossing of a border,
even a town
border that signifies its own type of demarcations of class
and/or race, may
affect they way that one will forever view the world. Also,
Shay
Youngblood's novel Black Girl in Paris helped us to see how
race and gender
continues to be an issue even after one crosses an ocean.
Hence, in chapter
two, influenced by Pettinger's article and Youngblood's
novel, the
students contributed essays and poems that illuminate the
issues that arise
when crossing borders forces one to reevaluate one's attitude
about race,
gender, and/or nationality . In this chapter, Krystian
Ramlogan's poem
"Oh! Trinidad" assures that the narrator's travel away from
home will not
diminish his love for his Caribbean island home. Carmen
Coffee's powerful
piece deconstructs those traditional narratives about
colorism that helped
to define major themes in African American literature. In
this narrative,
light skin and Aryan features cease to be coveted when one's
personal space
is invaded with unsolicited and undesirable attention. Ideas
introduced in
Houston Baker's poem "No Matter Where You Travel, You Still
be Black"
resound loudly in George Gee's essay "Berlin Discovery,"
which depicts the
narrator's astonishment at racist graffiti that he witnessed
during a trip
to Berlin with his parents. These essays and the poems in
this chapter are
moving in their interrogation of how race, gender, or
nationality affect
both the traveling experience and the lens through which
writers write.
In Chapter Three: The Caryl Phillips Experience, there
are a number
of research papers that examine Caryl Phillips as a traveler
and travel
writer. Phillips's travel texts, The European Tribe and The
Atlantic Sound,
inspire the writings in this chapter. The essays look at the
rhetorical
strategies that Phillips uses to represent other cultures and
places. The
student writing in this chapter also analyzes how Phillips's
representations
of others help to carve out a representation of his own
identity. These
essays attempt to discern what Phillips learns from his
travels as well.
For example, the essay by Earl Campbell and Aundrietta
Duncan situates
Phillips as a Black Atlanticist "who travels across the
Atlantic ocean, in a
route that is somewhat similar to that of the triangle trade
route." Derek
Butt's and Jordan Smith's paper examines Phillips's critique
of European
racism towards the Jewish community. Interestingly enough,
Stephene Evans's
and Krystian Ramlogan's essays began as a collaborative
effort, but as
Ramlogan's Caribbean sensibility and Evans's African American
perspective
began to clash, the two decided to write individual essays.
As a result,
these two very different analyses of Phillips's dual identity
are included.
The reader will notice how the beginning of Evans's and
Ramlogan's essays
are quite similar, yet, after the thesis statement, the two
essays examine
the same issue from two distinct points of view. I find this
quite
engaging. Reading these two essays one after the other,
makes this point
strikingly vivid.
This last section, the reflections on hometowns, is a
student
generated project that I came to value considerably. In this
section,
students provide brief descriptions of their hometowns. It is
hoped that
these representations will provide those living outside of
the United
States, a glimpse of the diversity of our country, and of
course Ramlogan's
inclusion of a short piece on Trinidad-Tobago proved to be
refreshing for
all of us.
Let me end by giving thanks to
Jordan Smith for his leadership skills
throughout the semester. The management of his 19 clamorous
and energetic
freshman mates was no easy task and was quite helpful to me.
Krystian
Ramlogan's web skills came in handy, particularly since
funding this year
for this project was not available. I am also so grateful to
Britney
Bennet's editing and revision skills that helped a number of
students to
revise essays to my satisfaction. And to Stephene Evans, I so
respect your
determination to produce a worthy product. My thanks and
appreciation goes
out to the entire Spring 2005 076 Honor Composition II class
for stepping up
to the plate.
Professor D.
Edwards Abdullah
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